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Poorly Perforated Poorly perforated man doesn't tear along the dotted line.
She rips off another a piece of him
every single time.

Lovers, be cautious: for the heart is much like the mystical voodoo doll.  Once given away, its owner relinquishes complete control over their lives to the recipient so that they may do as you they wish with you, and you must bear the brunt of it.  Should they choose to discard it, you shall be condemned to walk the earth without a soul...  Save by sheer force of will you manage to thieve it back.

Only two things can happen when a man is denied the one thing he cannot live without.  He ei

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Endless Mine

by ~ChaoticFox

Someday - someone will find me
Someday - someone will set me free
This can't - go on forever
I know - someone will come for me

(repeat)

Somebody take me away from here
Reach through the darkness and dry my tears
I keep on searching, but I can't see
Can't find the way out, can't set myself free

I... just wanna give up
But... I don't think I'm ever gonna make it

I can't take this
I can't take this
I can't take this
I can't take this

Please somebody save me, before I die
Break these walls, so I can see the light

I... just don't know what to do
I... need someone... to guide me through

(chorus x2)

My soul is lost in an endless mine
Wandering blindly for all of time
My heart is screaming to no avail
No one can hear me, I'm trapped in this hell


I... don't wanna die here
But... I don't think I'm ever gonna make it

I can't take this
I can't take this
I can't take this
I can't take this

Please somebody save me, before I die
Break these walls, so I can see the light

I... just don't know what to do
Some...one help me - I beg of you
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Cheesy Lyrics written to the melody of S3's Endless Mine: [link]

I feel like a couple of these lines need work, but this works as a rough draft, I guess.

EDIT: Tweaked some lines. I still want more variety in the verses, but I find myself awfully limited by my childish rhyming scheme. Expect at least one more edit before I consider this "finished".
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~Meta-fish Oct 16, 2011
I like it! I wish there were a version that were slowed down or something or I could fit the lyrics to the music better. I got the gist, and I like what you did with it. A little cheesy yeah, but it's at least kind of original in what you did with it.

It's kind of eerie too, with the endless mine being the substance you pulled from for a lot of the lines, and it worked well.
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~ChaoticFox Oct 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
There are a couple of really good slow versions, but they're rearrangements. Since I was VERY careful about matching each syllable to a specific note, I'm not sure they'd match up as well XD

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Endless Mine Someday - someone will find me
Someday - someone will set me free
This can't - go on forever
I know - someone will come for me

(repeat)

Somebody take me away from here
Reach through the darkness and dry my tears
I keep on searching, but I can't see
Can't find the way out, can't set myself free

I... just wanna give up
But... I don't think I'm ever gonna make it

I can't take this
I can't take this
I can't take this
I can't take this

Please somebody save me, before I die
Break these walls, so I can see the light

I... just don't know what to do
I... need someone... to guide me through

(chorus x2)

My soul is lost in an endless Endless Mine by ~ChaoticFox
Grumpy Grumpy little storm cloud, floating overhead
He pours his little heart out, until there's nothing left
He grumbles like he's angry and he lights up like he's mad
But all the while he's weeping for the love he never had...Grumpy by ~ChaoticFox
Poorly Perforated Poorly perforated man doesn't tear along the dotted line.
She rips off another a piece of him
every single time.

Lovers, be cautious: for the heart is much like the mystical voodoo doll.  Once given away, its owner relinquishes complete control over their lives to the recipient so that they may do as you they wish with you, and you must bear the brunt of it.  Should they choose to discard it, you shall be condemned to walk the earth without a soul...  Save by sheer force of will you manage to thieve it back.

Only two things can happen when a man is denied the one thing he cannot live without.  He eiPoorly Perforated by ~ChaoticFox
Love and Death - Draft I lie in bed at night, cold and alone...
and from the moment I close my eyes a shadow reaches out from the back of my mind,
threatening to consume me.

But in the height of my terror, I feel her warm and understanding arms envelop me...
In her embrace my heart is lifted
as my troubles fade away into the oblivion she offers me.

She, and she alone, brings me the comfort I can find nowhere else.
She is my solace. My savior.

I close my eyes and surrender to the soothing whispers she breathes so softly into my ear.
She pleads for me to stay with her, and my heart aches for nothing more than oblige her.

I am in love with the Lady DeathLove and Death - Draft by ~ChaoticFox
Emotional Boner - Draft 1 You
Give
Me
An emotional boner -
Tryin' so hard not to let it show.
But you unzipped my heart and unbuttoned my soul,
And my feelings couldn't help but grow!Emotional Boner - Draft 1 by ~ChaoticFox
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